to startle [experimental form]
the gravel drivewaypassed a purple sprayof wisteria wildByzantine root-bound childproud and untamednever sun-shamedclaiming territory rightand left ambitious and brightbold blushless lushness rootsrun...
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Bah. Not only do I admire the [i]cojones[/i] involved to invent a form, this reads *wonderfully*! A well done and admirable job, kudos! Bravo even!(What's a bandicoot?) 'You'll NEVER know if you don't...
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bandicoot: 1~a very large rat of India and Ceylon2~a ratlike animal of Australia that carries its youngin a pouch [Eddie Bauer, no doubt] and eats insects.***i do not know for a fact that wisteria and...
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Please don't abandon this, it is so very very good mostly. I so love the last two lines, I can not only accept, I welcome the weak rhyme, it just seems to fit for me. I would love to see the beginning...
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Ben, I like this attempt! It has a certain beauty: a small creature, a lovely vine, and an underground home. Thespianna
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It is certainly getting there...all of these take a couple of tweaks to get the knots out of them, even on established forms! The images are there...I think this is pretty close!Exit light...Enter...
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Ben,Wow, I'm impressed! okie dokie, making a copy of thisnew form.... Take care,Lucia
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